[song] My Light

ChaosBlade · January 22nd, 2005

Well, Here's my second attempt at poetry. Decided to share this one aswell as i got alot of positive feedback on my first.

Comments, as always, are welcome.

:: http://www.deviantart.com/view/14390822/ ::

Cid Highwind · January 23rd, 2005

It's nice, but it needs some good music to give the song some emotions and make it feel 'alive'

Blade556 · January 23rd, 2005

Love the song, man. I can't really picture how it would be sung out, since theres 6 lines in every verse, but it sure looks awesome. Love the way you set up the sentences with different and abstract words that have the same meaning as a different word...Anyway, enough confusing you

Keep up the good work

ChaosBlade · January 28th, 2005

>> Anyway, enough confusing you

Hehe, Dont worry, I think sometimes i can do that pretty good myself ^^

Thanks for the comments everyone.

Popuri · January 29th, 2005

can't you publish a singing version? ^^'
i would like more to listen it. ._.

ChaosBlade · January 29th, 2005

No such thing exists

I just wrote the lyrics, thats all. Im not a musician and i really cant sing anyway, so.. too bad i guess

January 22nd, 2005	#1 (permalink)
ChaosBlade Protect EVERYONE Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Israel Posts: 1,959	[song] My Light Well, Here's my second attempt at poetry. Decided to share this one aswell as i got alot of positive feedback on my first. Comments, as always, are welcome. :: http://www.deviantart.com/view/14390822/ :: __________________ "..Did you win?" "I lost." "You dumbass! You're still alive, You won!" "I couldn't protect anyone, And i couldn't defeat those who wounded us." *I LOST.*

January 23rd, 2005	#2 (permalink)
Cid Highwind Ramma Gay Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Somwhere out in space? The Land of the Free? Heaven or Hell? Posts: 11,678	It's nice, but it needs some good music to give the song some emotions and make it feel 'alive' __________________ PC Specs: CPU: Intel E4400 @ 2.66GHz GPU: ATi HD4870 / 512MB / Core: 775 / Mem: 1025 Mobo: Gigabyte EP35-DS3 (rev 2.1) SPU: Creative X-Fi Xtreme Music RAM: 2GB Corsair XMS2 DDR800 @ 4-4-4-12 ~ 800MHz HDD: 320GB Western Digital 16MB Caviar SE PSU: Hiper Type-R 580W Geometry Wars: 198.400 Lumines: 523.879 Rip: Cid's Bleemcast 28-08-2007 X360/Wii/PS3 belong to the current generation, update your mindset FFS

January 28th, 2005	#4 (permalink)
ChaosBlade Protect EVERYONE Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Israel Posts: 1,959	>> Anyway, enough confusing you Hehe, Dont worry, I think sometimes i can do that pretty good myself ^^ Thanks for the comments everyone. __________________ "..Did you win?" "I lost." "You dumbass! You're still alive, You won!" "I couldn't protect anyone, And i couldn't defeat those who wounded us." *I LOST.*

January 29th, 2005	#5 (permalink)
Popuri full support Priestress Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: on Tori-Yama's couch, germany Posts: 428	can't you publish a singing version? ^^' i would like more to listen it. ._. __________________ Human Priest Sanctuary; Realm: Forscherliga

January 29th, 2005	#6 (permalink)
ChaosBlade Protect EVERYONE Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Israel Posts: 1,959	No such thing exists I just wrote the lyrics, thats all. Im not a musician and i really cant sing anyway, so.. too bad i guess __________________ "..Did you win?" "I lost." "You dumbass! You're still alive, You won!" "I couldn't protect anyone, And i couldn't defeat those who wounded us." *I LOST.*

January 23rd, 2005	#3 (permalink)
Blade556 Banned Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Barrie Posts: 118	Love the song, man. I can't really picture how it would be sung out, since theres 6 lines in every verse, but it sure looks awesome. Love the way you set up the sentences with different and abstract words that have the same meaning as a different word...Anyway, enough confusing you Keep up the good work

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