Perpetual Artworks Thread - Page 61

runawayprisoner · December 10th, 2007

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Originally Posted by Mr. Killjoy

Well yeah, practice is important, but not everyone has the same innate skills, so it takes more work for some ppl than some others :/

It doesn't mean you can never get there though... so don't be discouraged.

I am glad I don't draw the same way I do when I was 10 because I practiced every single day since then!

And thanks, Kellicros.

Fadingz · December 10th, 2007

It took me half a year to start making some progress ><
However, I believe the room for improvement is infinite for everyone, There is no limit in skill.
Beyond the horizon is a new world; one just needs the courage expand one's skills and sight

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A mouse tutorial I made ^^

ChankastRules · December 11th, 2007

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Beyond the horizon is a new world; one just needs the courage expand one's skills and sight

Well, my hand is not so steady when I am drawing, I do not know why it can be very steady when I do archery :S

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It doesn't mean you can never get there though... so don't be discouraged. I am glad I don't draw the same way I do when I was 10 because I practiced every single day since then!

I guess I need more patience!

Hard core Rikki · December 11th, 2007

wtf, freaky tuto fadz

pretty neat actually

Fadingz · December 11th, 2007

Updated the tut a bit ^^

runawayprisoner · December 12th, 2007

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Originally Posted by ChankastRules

Well, my hand is not so steady when I am drawing, I do not know why it can be very steady when I do archery :S

I go over one line more than twenty times... just for a sketch... and wait, I can't even make curves without having to go back to it at least once!

Here's a tip: you're not perfect... and heck, nobody is perfect! If your line is not straight... just make small straight lines... and connect them into a bigger line. Or if your line is not curvy... and there...

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I guess I need more patience!

I guess you need some self-confidence and arrogance! I know I do... but only in art.

Anyway, here's what happens when I am not lazy... (WIP alert!)

And suddenly... after the skin, I feel lazy again... XD

P.S.: Notice how my sketch is a bunch of jiggly and wiggly lines hat ar short... and not straight!

Fadingz · December 12th, 2007

I updated the previous pic xD
Add some lighting and effects

Mr. Killjoy · December 12th, 2007

I like to add "bloom" too but you could have done it better. maybe less blur, color curve amplifying light colors, and finally, a good setting for opacity on your layer

Fadingz · December 12th, 2007

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Originally Posted by Mr. Killjoy

I like to add "bloom" too but you could have done it better. maybe less blur, color curve amplifying light colors, and finally, a good setting for opacity on your layer

Yeah, I think I'll turn doen the blurr a bit xD
I'll try to fix it sometime today ><
Thhank you for the comments^^

Mr. Killjoy · December 12th, 2007

Still have to draw the arms before I photoshop it but thought it was enough to get the 1st comments. It's a bit messy and has bold lines but it will be fixed when I'll start coloring

Fadingz · December 12th, 2007

Nice pose

but... her boobs are not the same size xD, and her left leg (our right) looks a bit weird anatomy wise.
Seems to be a great start

Mr. Killjoy · December 12th, 2007

"her boobs are not the same size xD"
must be some kind of problem with contrast not being the same than on my paper ^^' tell me which boob you think smaller please

"and her left leg (our right) looks a bit weird anatomy wise."
Yeah, it's true there's room for improvement here, but I'll focus on most shocking issues first since legs may be cut depending on if it looks better with or without in a background... what's wrong with it in your opinion? Too fat around the knee?

Fadingz · December 12th, 2007

Seems like her left(our right) one is a bit smaller xP

For the leg, I think the outer curve is too concaved, and her butt(the little triangle int between her legs) is too low, or perhaps just my personal opinions xD.

Mr. Killjoy · December 12th, 2007

"Seems like her left(our right) one is a bit smaller xP"
I thought it was big enough, or maybe it's because at 1st when I draw it she was supposed to be laying on her back ^^' what do you suggest? Making it bigger, or making the other one smaller?

For the leg, well, maybe it doesn't show much, but it's a bit bent toward, with the invisible foot supposed to be a little lifted up... anyways, this is a part that should be doable directly on photoshop. Erasing with my dirty rubber drives me crazy

BTW, is it obvious that the camera is at ground level and pointing upward?

(Updated some stuff)

Fadingz · December 12th, 2007

Moving the other one(the one at our right) up a little and smaller might do

Here's mine again with bloom effect down a few level xD

Mr. Killjoy · December 12th, 2007

"moving the other one(the one at our right) up a little and smaller might do"
As I thought ^^ I'll do that then.
Yours is much better now, bloom is still there but discreet enough so it's no longer a problem IMO

Which is better, left or right? (don't mind the lower part of the legs under then knees, I didn't try to fix their pose yet)

Fadingz · December 13th, 2007

I prefer the right one ^^

Mr. Killjoy · December 13th, 2007

Thanks, I'm kinda losing my perception of proportions after too much time spent on this damn sheet...

ChankastRules · December 13th, 2007

you really like muscular women don't you killjoy?

Mr. Killjoy · December 13th, 2007

Not really actually, but I often emphasize them (mostly shadows) to have a better view of important anatomic spots. Then well, if it looks good I keep it that way, while trying to lower the shadows/highlight contrast so it doesn't show as much as in the sketches. I admit I often fail it it though

Well at least this one has a reason to by athletic, I'm planning to give her futuristic clothing and a gun (if I can get it right with the hand

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Fadingz 大嘴巴 Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: 應許之地 Posts: 3,178	It took me half a year to start making some progress >< However, I believe the room for improvement is infinite for everyone, There is no limit in skill. Beyond the horizon is a new world; one just needs the courage expand one's skills and sight . A mouse tutorial I made ^^ __________________ My deviantART~ QX9650 @ 3.8GHz \| G.Skill 2GB DDR2 1066 RAM x 4 \| Vista 64 Ultimate \| Quadro FX4600 \| X-Fi Elite Pro \| SAMSUNG 2253BW \| Cosmos S \| ASUS RAMPAGE FORMULA \| Western Digital Raptor X x2 \| ThermalTake 850W Last edited by Fadingz; December 11th, 2007 at 05:21. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

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Fadingz 大嘴巴 Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: 應許之地 Posts: 3,178	I updated the previous pic xD Add some lighting and effects __________________ My deviantART~ QX9650 @ 3.8GHz \| G.Skill 2GB DDR2 1066 RAM x 4 \| Vista 64 Ultimate \| Quadro FX4600 \| X-Fi Elite Pro \| SAMSUNG 2253BW \| Cosmos S \| ASUS RAMPAGE FORMULA \| Western Digital Raptor X x2 \| ThermalTake 850W Last edited by Fadingz; December 12th, 2007 at 03:46.

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Mr. Killjoy [Suggest a custom title] Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Somewhere I don't belong (La Rochelle, France) Posts: 7,753	Still have to draw the arms before I photoshop it but thought it was enough to get the 1st comments. It's a bit messy and has bold lines but it will be fixed when I'll start coloring __________________ Leader of "The Pessimists' Club" CPU: Core 2 Q6600@3GHz - RAM: 2GB DDR2 (Corsair PC6400) VGA: GF8800GTS 512MB OC - Mobo: Gigabyte EP35C-DS3R - PSU: Antec Trio 650w 24Mb/1Mb ADSL - WindowsXP-Pro SP2 --------------------------------------------- All ePSXe plugins up-to-date http://mrkilljoy.deviantart.com/ Last edited by Mr. Killjoy; December 12th, 2007 at 21:28.

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Fadingz 大嘴巴 Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: 應許之地 Posts: 3,178	Nice pose but... her boobs are not the same size xD, and her left leg (our right) looks a bit weird anatomy wise. Seems to be a great start __________________ My deviantART~ QX9650 @ 3.8GHz \| G.Skill 2GB DDR2 1066 RAM x 4 \| Vista 64 Ultimate \| Quadro FX4600 \| X-Fi Elite Pro \| SAMSUNG 2253BW \| Cosmos S \| ASUS RAMPAGE FORMULA \| Western Digital Raptor X x2 \| ThermalTake 850W

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Mr. Killjoy [Suggest a custom title] Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Somewhere I don't belong (La Rochelle, France) Posts: 7,753	"her boobs are not the same size xD" must be some kind of problem with contrast not being the same than on my paper ^^' tell me which boob you think smaller please "and her left leg (our right) looks a bit weird anatomy wise." Yeah, it's true there's room for improvement here, but I'll focus on most shocking issues first since legs may be cut depending on if it looks better with or without in a background... what's wrong with it in your opinion? Too fat around the knee? __________________ Leader of "The Pessimists' Club" CPU: Core 2 Q6600@3GHz - RAM: 2GB DDR2 (Corsair PC6400) VGA: GF8800GTS 512MB OC - Mobo: Gigabyte EP35C-DS3R - PSU: Antec Trio 650w 24Mb/1Mb ADSL - WindowsXP-Pro SP2 --------------------------------------------- All ePSXe plugins up-to-date http://mrkilljoy.deviantart.com/

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Fadingz 大嘴巴 Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: 應許之地 Posts: 3,178	Seems like her left(our right) one is a bit smaller xP For the leg, I think the outer curve is too concaved, and her butt(the little triangle int between her legs) is too low, or perhaps just my personal opinions xD. __________________ My deviantART~ QX9650 @ 3.8GHz \| G.Skill 2GB DDR2 1066 RAM x 4 \| Vista 64 Ultimate \| Quadro FX4600 \| X-Fi Elite Pro \| SAMSUNG 2253BW \| Cosmos S \| ASUS RAMPAGE FORMULA \| Western Digital Raptor X x2 \| ThermalTake 850W

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Mr. Killjoy [Suggest a custom title] Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Somewhere I don't belong (La Rochelle, France) Posts: 7,753	"Seems like her left(our right) one is a bit smaller xP" I thought it was big enough, or maybe it's because at 1st when I draw it she was supposed to be laying on her back ^^' what do you suggest? Making it bigger, or making the other one smaller? For the leg, well, maybe it doesn't show much, but it's a bit bent toward, with the invisible foot supposed to be a little lifted up... anyways, this is a part that should be doable directly on photoshop. Erasing with my dirty rubber drives me crazy BTW, is it obvious that the camera is at ground level and pointing upward? (Updated some stuff) __________________ Leader of "The Pessimists' Club" CPU: Core 2 Q6600@3GHz - RAM: 2GB DDR2 (Corsair PC6400) VGA: GF8800GTS 512MB OC - Mobo: Gigabyte EP35C-DS3R - PSU: Antec Trio 650w 24Mb/1Mb ADSL - WindowsXP-Pro SP2 --------------------------------------------- All ePSXe plugins up-to-date http://mrkilljoy.deviantart.com/ Last edited by Mr. Killjoy; December 12th, 2007 at 21:28.

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Fadingz 大嘴巴 Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: 應許之地 Posts: 3,178	Moving the other one(the one at our right) up a little and smaller might do Here's mine again with bloom effect down a few level xD __________________ My deviantART~ QX9650 @ 3.8GHz \| G.Skill 2GB DDR2 1066 RAM x 4 \| Vista 64 Ultimate \| Quadro FX4600 \| X-Fi Elite Pro \| SAMSUNG 2253BW \| Cosmos S \| ASUS RAMPAGE FORMULA \| Western Digital Raptor X x2 \| ThermalTake 850W

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Mr. Killjoy [Suggest a custom title] Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Somewhere I don't belong (La Rochelle, France) Posts: 7,753	"moving the other one(the one at our right) up a little and smaller might do" As I thought ^^ I'll do that then. Yours is much better now, bloom is still there but discreet enough so it's no longer a problem IMO Which is better, left or right? (don't mind the lower part of the legs under then knees, I didn't try to fix their pose yet) __________________ Leader of "The Pessimists' Club" CPU: Core 2 Q6600@3GHz - RAM: 2GB DDR2 (Corsair PC6400) VGA: GF8800GTS 512MB OC - Mobo: Gigabyte EP35C-DS3R - PSU: Antec Trio 650w 24Mb/1Mb ADSL - WindowsXP-Pro SP2 --------------------------------------------- All ePSXe plugins up-to-date http://mrkilljoy.deviantart.com/ Last edited by Mr. Killjoy; December 13th, 2007 at 14:02. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

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Fadingz 大嘴巴 Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: 應許之地 Posts: 3,178	I prefer the right one ^^ __________________ My deviantART~ QX9650 @ 3.8GHz \| G.Skill 2GB DDR2 1066 RAM x 4 \| Vista 64 Ultimate \| Quadro FX4600 \| X-Fi Elite Pro \| SAMSUNG 2253BW \| Cosmos S \| ASUS RAMPAGE FORMULA \| Western Digital Raptor X x2 \| ThermalTake 850W

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Mr. Killjoy [Suggest a custom title] Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Somewhere I don't belong (La Rochelle, France) Posts: 7,753	Thanks, I'm kinda losing my perception of proportions after too much time spent on this damn sheet... __________________ Leader of "The Pessimists' Club" CPU: Core 2 Q6600@3GHz - RAM: 2GB DDR2 (Corsair PC6400) VGA: GF8800GTS 512MB OC - Mobo: Gigabyte EP35C-DS3R - PSU: Antec Trio 650w 24Mb/1Mb ADSL - WindowsXP-Pro SP2 --------------------------------------------- All ePSXe plugins up-to-date http://mrkilljoy.deviantart.com/

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