Can u fill in the blanks please ? (Heavy Rain)

[S.T.@.R.S]

hi guys...

I love this game and I've downloaded a trailer which I don't fully understand what they're sayin'.. could u please fill the rest and check all of 'em to see if there's a mistake ? I'd appreciate it..

parts in red means I'm not sure.


Director: Go ahead. take a seat.
can you gimme your name and age please ?


Mary: My name is Mary Smith, I'm 24.

Director: Have you ever taken any acting lessons, Mary ?

Mary: Not really yet. couldn't afford it but I watch a lot of films and I'm -------- so much when I'm watching them.

Director: Have you shot anything recently ?

Mary: I've had a few bit parts little things here and there and nothing very serious for the roman. I'm always too tall to a short Romeo. There's always something wrong with me.

Director: OK. have you learned your lines ?

Mary: Yes.

Director: Let's get started. mark it please.

--------: Casting Heavy Rain. actress Mary Smith. take 1.


Mary: The first time I saw you I knew you were important. I thought these things only happen in the movies, you know. pounding heart, the sweaty hands and the shaky legs. I was coming out of the theater and it started pouring heavy rain. so there of us soaking wet. teeth chattering, freezing cold and then you came up to me. you looked to me straight in the eyes and you said: need an umbrella, Miss ? you sent me flowers for weeks and you said you love me forever. a few minutes later we were getting married. God it sounds stupid. is it your corny romance ? but real life never ends of being what you think it's gonna be. you think it's gonna be one big happy fairy tale and in one day you wake up in an average little house, ---------------- (I guess she's sayin' "you live in one of") average little life and your real dreams are about paying the bills and maybe some day getting a biger TV. ------ (is it "cause" ?) you realized that maybe that wasn't the life you were dreaming of. you realize maybe things could a been different and maybe I actually could a lived with all that but then one day it'll just stop. ----------- something small. a little ----------------------. a few nights when you come home a bit late. at first I tell myself, are you crazy ? but he would never do -- ("done" maybe ?) such a thing. but just to ease my mind one night I follow you as you leave the office. I follow you to the CD hotel where you meet the girl and then my whole world falls apart. I come home and I cry for hours in my kitchen. I get the gun from the drawer in the bedroom and I tell myself. and if this is all that life has to offer me, then I can do without. but then I changed my mind. after all I'm not the one who's cheating. so quitely I wait for you to come home sitting in my average little kitchen. obviously when you get home you don't suspect a thing so I press the ****in' gun against your forhead and I take a few seconds to watch the fear go in your eyes. you tell yourself she won't do it, she doesn't have the guts. she's just trying to teach me a lesson. but you are so -----------, honey (I'm sure she's generally sayin' sth like this "you've gone wrong".. damn I dunno why I hear sth like this: you're so gone long honey). I sentence you to death for turning my life into a ------------------. for stepping on my dreams. for not giving a sh!t about me all those years and for lying to me and betraying me and humiliating me. I'm making an example out of you for all the *******s out there who ----------------- keep on f^ckin' this over and over. goodbye my love.

So, how was it ?

Director: Very nice, very nice!

Mary: You think I might stand a chance ?

Director: Someone will get in touch with you and let you know.

-------: She wasn't too bad, huh ?

Director: Doesn't matter. she's too tall for the part. Next!


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BTW, I've heard this game is coming only for PS3.. is that righ ?

thanks again...

[cottonvibes]

huh!?!?!?

i'm sorry, but wtf are you talking about! :O

whats Heavy Rain?, and don't tell me you memorized that huge dialog...

[ChankastRules]

Heavy rain is a new game from the makers of Indigo Prophecy if I am not mistaken, and I saw that scene it is cool!

[S.T.@.R.S]

i'm sorry, but wtf are you talking about! :O

please.. when you don't have any information about sth, you don't have to talk like that...

and don't tell me you memorized that huge dialog...

I didn't memorize.. oh, yeah, I did. after listening for thousand times I've just memorized it. but.. I need some help.. those blank parts need to be filled out. is there sb who could fill them out ?

Heavy rain is a new game from the makers of Indigo Prophecy if I am not mistaken

exactly.

and I saw that scene it is cool!

if you've seen it. why don't you help ?

[PCXL-Fan]

Here are the grammar corrections for your paragraph:

you looked AT me straight in the eyes


I get the gun from the drawer in the bedroom and I tell myself if this is all that life has to offer me,

[hanibal81]

BLA BLA BLA,,, realy what is it that aim from such a thread,, and don't talk to cottonvibes that way (you don't know how helpfull he/she is),,, after all its not an interesting thing....mmmm,,,be smart and seek that help using some translators/web stuff,,,NOT TO BOTHER!!

[ChankastRules]

It is a spoken dialogue I would help, but it was quite a long time since I have seen it so I do not remmember, he just wants someone who have seen the scene and is good at english to put in writing what they said.

[cottonvibes]

Originally Posted by hanibal81

BLA BLA BLA,,, realy what is it that aim from such a thread,, and don't talk to cottonvibes that way (you don't know how helpfull he/she is!)

S.T.@.R.S,
sorry if I sounded rude cuz I said "wtf", but I didn't mean anything by it :P

[S.T.@.R.S]

you looked AT me straight in the eyes

I know the preposition of the verb "look" is AT but I dunno why I hear "to". that's why I wrote it in red. maybe I'm making a mistake. the video I got from youtube isn't of good quality.

I get the gun from the drawer in the bedroom and I tell myself if this is all that life has to offer me

now, I'm sure you haven't seen the trailer, right ? if you care more there's a word between MYSELF and IF...
thanks anyway bud.

BLA BLA BLA,,, realy what is it that aim from such a thread

it's just like casting pearls before swine.
I don't like to be rude but seems I've got no choice..
will u please zip your trap or I do it myself, huh ? I'm getting some help from some ngemu nice guys and it's none of your goddamn business whatever I do.. it's been a while you beeeeeen 'round here so watch your word... ok ?

after all its not an interesting thing

it shouldn't be interesting for you geek.

be smart and seek that help using some translators/web stuff

I've done before. how am I supposed to find any stuff when there's no any subtitle, you dweeb ?

AND I don't really know what the hell is wrong with morons like you that whenever I make a thread like this you and morons of your ilk wanna jump down my throat. if it's not interesting or you don't like it, then what on goddamn earth r u dooooin' here, huh ?
I hope this won't happen again.

[PCXL-Fan]

that. (its not needed though) its one of those words (that) you don't absolutely need. <---another example where the word "that" could have been left in or out.

[S.T.@.R.S]

S.T.@.R.S,
sorry if I sounded rude cuz I said "wtf", but I didn't mean anything by it :P

not at all ,man. did I use any smilies to show my anger ?
what did I say ? I just simply said you didn't have to talk like that..as simple as that.

It is a spoken dialogue I would help, but it was quite a long time since I have seen it so I do not remmember, he just wants someone who have seen the scene and is good at english to put in writing what they said.

you don't need to explain to this sneaky devil... he knew what I meant.
btw.. I'd appreciate if you help me.. I really like this game..

[cottonvibes]

S.T.@.R.S calm down.

no one called you any names like "geek" or "dweeb", so theres no need to call other people names.

one of the rules here is to respect our members, so lets try and do that

If in my post you felt i was disrepecting you, I'm sorry, because i didn't mean it in a derogatory way.

[V1ncent]

These are just assumptions .
Director: Go ahead. take a seat.
can you gimme your name and age please ?


Mary: My name is Mary Smith, I'm 24.

Director: Have you ever taken any acting lessons, Mary ?

Mary: Not really yet. couldn't afford it but I watch a lot of films and I'm moved so much when I'm watching them.

Director: Have you shot anything recently ?

Mary: I've had a few bit parts little things here and there and nothing very serious for the roman. I'm always too tall to a short Romeo. There's always something wrong with me.

Director: OK. have you learned your lines ?

Mary: Yes.

Director: Let's get started. mark it please.

--------: Casting Heavy Rain. actress Mary Smith. take 1.

Mary: The first time I saw you I knew you were important. I thought these things only happen in the movies, you know. pounding heart, the sweaty hands and the shaky legs. I was coming out of the theater and it started pouring heavy rain. so there of us soaking wet. teeth chattering, freezing cold and then you came up to me. you looked at me straight in the eyes and you said: need an umbrella, Miss ? you sent me flowers for weeks and you said you love me forever. a few minutes later we were getting married. God it sounds stupid. is it your corny romance ? but real life never ends of being what you think it's gonna be. you think it's gonna be one big happy fairy tale and in one day you wake up in an average little house. You're living one of the average little life and your real dreams are about paying the bills and maybe some day getting a biger TV. Because you realized that maybe that wasn't the life you were dreaming of. you realize maybe things could a been different and maybe I actually could have lived with all that but then one day it'll just stop. Specially something small. a little lip-stick on the collar. a few nights when you come home a bit late. at first I tell myself, are you crazy ? but he would never do such a thing. but just to ease my mind one night I follow you as you leave the office. I follow you to the CD hotel where you meet the girl and then my whole world falls apart. I come home and I cry for hours in my kitchen. I get the gun from the drawer in the bedroom and I tell myself. and if this is all that life has to offer me, then I can do without. but then I changed my mind. after all I'm not the one who's cheating. so quitely I wait for you to come home sitting in my average little kitchen. obviously when you get home you don't suspect a thing so I press the ****in' gun against your forhead and I take a few seconds to watch the fear go in your eyes. you tell yourself she won't do it, she doesn't have the guts. she's just trying to teach me a lesson. but you've gone so wrong honey . I sentence you to death for turning my life into a soap opera clitche. for stepping on my dreams. for not giving a sh!t about me all those years and for lying to me and betraying me and humiliating me. I'm making an example out of you for all the *******s out there who think they can keep on f^ckin' this over and over. goodbye my love.

[S.T.@.R.S]

no one called you any names like "geek" or "dweeb", so theres no need to call other people names.

I wish he'd called me names.. it was worse than callin' names. you know what ?
I think this video clip is a good example for these kinda ppl. (the moment when Mary Smith presses the gun against her perfidious husband and goes
I'm makin' an example out of you ,........

If in my post you felt i was disrepecting you, I'm sorry, because i didn't mean it in a derogatory way.

come on man.. I told u before I have no grudges against you.

one of the rules here is to respect our members, so lets try and do that

have you taken a look at the date I joined this forum ?

V1ncent thanks a million..

YouTube - Heavy Rain

[V1ncent]

Originally Posted by S.T.@.R.S

V1ncent thanks a million..

My pleasure But we deserve it when we help you completely.
I am working on it.

[S.T.@.R.S]

Thank u veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery much.

[hanibal81]

Originally Posted by S.T.@.R.S

Thank u veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery much.

Watch your anger young creature!!, its a real nemisis, it will **** you somewhere else,,,
Talking about respecting others cottonvibes ()'heh',,,,,,at least show us how to respect forums junk of rules

[S.T.@.R.S]

SILENCE is the answer of idiots like u.. I bet you don't even know what you're sayin'..

[hanibal81]

Originally Posted by S.T.@.R.S

SILENCE is the answer of idiots like u.. I bet you don't even know what you're sayin'..

HMPH, You're smart, I do agree with that,,, notice that no one posted the junk of words you did,,, sorry for you...A hope within : some one to bane(perhaps the RE3 nemisis)/ (oh to make you banned), to tie up your moth